A student athlete. Notice which comes first.
Bowersox is my last name, Sox for short.
Collin is my first name, spelled with two l's not one.
Dedicate myself to what I desire.
Elevator musis is the best.
Family and friends come first.
Garfield was my favorite cartoon when I was little.
Hardwork is key.
Ice cream is a good dessert.
Jacob Way has been my best friend since preschool.
Kevin is my brother.
Lions are my favorite team, and the decoration of my room.
Mom is the best.
Number 12 for every sport I play.
Outside the box thinker.
Packers are my least favorite team in the NFL.
Quakers oatmeal. Great for breakfast, or any other time of the day.
Running back in football.
Sophomore at Stevenson High school.
Tall for my age.
Umpire for the LJAL Baseball league.
Very fun to hang out with.
Wrestler for Stevenson.
Xbox One when I have time.
Young man. Fifteen years old.
Zap Zone is still the best place in the world.
Nice job Coolin. I liked how you were able to specify your values in many of your sentences, as well as describe your characteristics. Really nice job!
ReplyDeleteInteresting here Sox. I didn't know you and Jacob have known each other since pre- school! My constructive comments is to try to have your lines a similar length for the flow, and to proofread a little more for dead words or flaws ("musis" instead of "music")
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